It started like any other random evening in the neighborhood—barefoot kids riding scooters, music echoing from someone’s open window, and my neighbor Luis walking his dog like he always does around dusk.
But this time, the dog wasn’t his usual chill self.
He’s a big husky named Bolo. Usually quiet, barely barks, walks like he’s too cool to care. But last night? Bolo was pulling at the leash like something was dragging him forward. Ears up, pacing, panting harder than usual.
I walked over to say hi. Luis gave me a weird look, like he was already on edge.
“He’s never acted like this,” he said. “He bolted out the door before I even clipped the leash.”
We were standing in the driveway, watching as Bolo tugged at the leash with a kind of frantic energy that was unsettling. The usually calm dog was behaving like he’d seen something—or maybe smelled something—that put him on high alert. His body was tense, his fur bristled, and his sharp eyes darted around, scanning the surroundings.
Luis tried to calm him down, but Bolo wasn’t having it. He kept tugging, pulling on the leash as if trying to escape something unseen. The street was quiet, the neighborhood still, but there was an energy in the air that I couldn’t shake.
“Do you think something’s wrong?” I asked, my voice low.
Luis just shook his head, a grim expression on his face. “I don’t know… but this isn’t like him at all.”
The dog continued his erratic behavior, and as I watched, my eyes caught something across the street. It was just a shadow, but it felt… wrong. I couldn’t explain it, but there was something about the way it moved—almost like a person, but not quite. My heart skipped a beat.
“What is that?” I whispered, pointing to the corner of the street.
Luis squinted in the direction I was looking. His face paled. “That’s the old park. But no one’s ever over there this time of night.”
He tugged on the leash again, trying to pull Bolo back toward the house, but Bolo was fixated. His entire body was trembling now, and his growl was low and menacing. I had never seen him like this, not once.
Luis, normally calm and collected, looked like he was starting to panic. “Something’s not right. Maybe I should take him home.”
But Bolo wasn’t having it. With one last surge of strength, he yanked the leash out of Luis’s hand, sprinting across the street and heading straight toward the park. Luis shouted, but the dog was already too far ahead.
“Luis, wait!” I yelled, but he was already running after Bolo, fear evident in every step he took. I followed, heart pounding, unsure of what was going on, but something told me we needed to follow the dog.
We reached the park in a matter of minutes. It was a small, run-down area with old swings and a cracked pavement that hadn’t seen any real care in years. There was an eerie stillness to it, like the park hadn’t been visited in ages. But Bolo wasn’t stopping. He charged straight toward the far corner, where a small grove of trees stood.
Luis caught up to him, breathless and sweating. “Bolo! What’s wrong with you?”
I was standing a few feet behind them, scanning the area nervously. That feeling I had earlier, the unease, was growing stronger. There was something off about the trees, the way the shadows seemed to cling to them in an unnatural way. I couldn’t shake the sense that we weren’t alone.
Then, out of nowhere, I heard a voice—a soft, raspy whisper.
“You shouldn’t be here…”
I froze. The voice came from the trees, but it was so quiet, so faint, that I couldn’t be sure I heard it right. I looked around, but there was no one there. The park was still empty. My stomach dropped, and a chill ran down my spine.
Luis didn’t seem to hear it, but he had already turned his attention to Bolo, who was now standing in front of a thick bush. The dog was sniffing at the ground, growling deep in his chest.
“I don’t like this,” I said, stepping back. “Luis, maybe we should go back.”
But Luis didn’t seem to hear me. His focus was entirely on Bolo. He took a cautious step forward, but just as he did, the dog leaped backward, barking loudly. Then, something in the bushes shifted.
A figure emerged from the shadows.
At first, I thought it was just a person—maybe someone who had been hanging out in the park. But as the figure stepped closer, I realized it wasn’t just a person. It was a woman, but there was something off about her. Her clothes were ragged, her hair matted, and her skin was pale, almost gray. She moved slowly, almost unnaturally, like she was dragging herself forward.
Luis didn’t seem to notice the danger yet. “Hey, are you alright?” he called out.
The woman stopped in her tracks, her hollow eyes locking onto Luis with an unsettling intensity. And then, in a voice that sent shivers down my spine, she spoke again.
“You shouldn’t have come…”
The words felt like a warning, but it was too late. Bolo, who had been growling steadily, suddenly lunged toward the woman, barking furiously. Luis jumped back, his face full of confusion and fear.
“What is going on?” Luis muttered, stumbling backward as Bolo continued to snarl at the strange woman.
I reached for my phone, my hands shaking. But before I could dial for help, the woman’s eyes flashed with something dark, something that made my blood run cold. Her lips curled into a twisted smile.
And just like that, the air around us changed. The ground beneath our feet seemed to tremble, the trees above us shaking as if caught in a fierce wind—though there was no wind. The woman raised a hand, pointing directly at Bolo, her voice growing louder.
“Your loyalty is what brought you here,” she said. “But loyalty is a price. You have to choose now… your bond to him or to what is left of yourself.”
The ground beneath us cracked open. A dark, thick mist rose from the earth, swallowing everything in sight. The woman disappeared into the fog, leaving behind only the sound of Bolo’s frantic barks.
Luis and I stood there, rooted to the spot, our minds trying to catch up with the madness unfolding before us. But the mist was rising fast, closing in on us.
Suddenly, Bolo stopped barking. The dog went completely still, staring into the mist with those haunting, wide eyes.
“No…” Luis whispered, his voice barely audible. “Not Bolo. Please.”
I felt my heart pounding in my chest, but I knew what we had to do. “We have to go, Luis,” I said, grabbing his arm. “We need to get out of here before it’s too late.”
But as we turned to leave, a strange, otherworldly force seemed to hold us in place. The mist wrapped around us like a suffocating blanket. And then, in the distance, I saw the silhouette of the woman again. Only now, she was no longer alone. Behind her stood countless others, figures in the mist, their eyes glowing faintly, as if waiting for something. Or someone.
I turned to Luis, my voice shaking. “We have to run. Now.”
Just as I said that, the ground gave way beneath us. But instead of falling into darkness, we were thrown backward, landing on solid ground as the mist seemed to dissipate all at once. The park was quiet again. The air felt… normal.
Luis and I scrambled to our feet, both of us looking around, utterly confused and terrified. Bolo was standing beside us, his fur bristled but calm. He looked up at us, wagging his tail.
“What just happened?” I gasped.
Luis was shaking, his face pale. “I… I don’t know. That woman… those figures…”
But one thing was certain—whatever had happened, whatever strange force we had just encountered, we had been given a second chance. The air felt lighter, almost as if something had been lifted.
As we walked back home, I couldn’t shake the feeling that something deeper was at play. The mist, the strange woman, and the unsettling choice she had offered—it all felt like a warning. A warning about the price of loyalty, about bonds that go too deep, and about the consequences of choosing the wrong path.
And as we stepped back onto our street, I realized that sometimes the strangest experiences can teach you the most important lessons. The karma of that night, the balance between loyalty and self-preservation, was something I would never forget.
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